Written in February, 2020, this poem reflects forward in time when one is living those final precious years. In taking this Christian view, we ask God for those treasured “five more minutes.”

The elderly man’s final strength turns to run
His long, full life now enters its final sunset
Recalling the good times, craving a bit more
“Five more minutes” before the setting sun
Swapping one more story, with my dear Dad
His role in life, serving as my own launch pad
Listening to Neil Diamond, singing one more song
He conveys my love for “America”—forever strong
Taking extra time to say, “I sincerely apologize”
For actions which turned out bad, not very wise
Please God, just five more minutes . . .
Fishing the Madison River, time for one more cast
Herb standing ready, with a memory from the past
Experiencing one more awe-inspiring sunrise
One only God can create, His lasting surprise
Sharing a moment, with a special great-grandchild
Before falling back to sleep, she winks and smiles
Please God, just five more minutes . . .
Witnessing fresh, fallen snow—pristine white
Pine trees show off under moon’s bright light
Stepping into a high school classroom once more
Taking notes from the elite of the teaching corps
Witnessing a Big Montana Sky, fetches a smile
Please allow me to see, at least one more mile
Please God, just five more minutes . . .
Traveling to a place, never seen before
Anxious to view, what’s really in store?
Sharing with my bride, “I love you” one more time
Enduring heartbeats and affection, forever rhyme
Asking my Heavenly Father, for forgiveness
My risen Lord and Savior, being my witness
Thank you God for these five more minutes!

Richard, this brought tears to my eyes thinking of my Dad and life, in general. My devotion this morning was about peace, even in pain. I’m thankful for the minutes I have and remember these as I might say, “five more minutes”. Would you join me in prayer as my Dad has a very vital MRI on Thursday? God bless you and yours this Christmas week. 🙏🏻🎄💚
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Praying for your Dad. Lord God, continue to watch over him. May your grace and peace lead.
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Amen. Thank you so much.
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Profoundly beautiful! It made me weep!
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Susan, your kind words are appreciated. I think we all hope our final times are filled with life’s treasured peace.
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Amen 🙏
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Susie, thanks for reading this poem. I think many of us can fill in the spaces of time. Blessings and Merry Christmas!
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I decided not to stay here at the beach, until Christmas Day, because I thought it would be worse to pack and drive home in the morning, than be home and wake up in an empty house.
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Merry Christmas!
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