This poem was published in July, 2019, and features an early attempt at writing poetry using mystery-filled imagery. It was originally written in March of the same year as an entry for a poetic publication. While the poem didn’t make the cut, it has been well-received here on WordPress.
A life can sometimes seem deep and dark
Just as the oceans’ waves find their mark
From season to season, a person splashes along
Just as the oceans redeploy, intense and strong
Hardships and misfortunes grudgingly arrive each week
Just as the oceans’ depths mask secrets, waiting to seek
Morning’s sunrise embraces, cheerful and bold
Just as the oceans splash water, much too cold
Today brings a bit of uncertainty and sadness
Just as the oceans bring a light of happiness
One wonders and dreams of a better life
Just as the oceans dispense little strife
A walk along the sandy beach sounds great
Just as the oceans’ tides deliver a final fate
The gentle waves engage loneliness for a swim
Just as the oceans’ surf arrives without a whim
A final desperate, draining breath takes one under
Just as the oceans stand still and start to wonder
I enjoyed how you related so much of life to so many wonderful images of the ocean. I just can’t tell if the poem is meant to end on a sad note, or if I am misinterpreting it…
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Jim, I appreciate you sharing. I think the end of the poem is both filled with some sadness and offering the reader a way to finish it.
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ok, thanks for that…
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This is so beautiful Richard. One of the best !!
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Ashok, your words mean a lot. This poem is quite different from most of my regular poetry. It was one of my early attempts to write this type of poem. Keeping you, your family, and your nation in my thoughts and prayers.
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Always a pleasure my dear friend!!
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This poem seems so sad, but the imagery of the ocean is beautiful!
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Thanks for sharing Susan. Yes, this poem takes the reader on a rollercoaster ride. I don’t often write such a poem.
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Reading this poem is like riding the ocean waves.
Blessings Richard.
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Crissy, I appreciate how your thoughts relate to the poem. It is definitely filled with a feeling of ocean waves. Grace and peace.
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The Lord bless you richly
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