Here is a micro short story with a length of 115 words. I was shooting for about 100 so I missed the mark by a little bit. Tell me what you think. Should I write more of these types of stories?
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A famished black bear rummages through the thick, overgrown forest. His endless appetite resembles a midnight thief raiding the fridge for a sweet tasting snack.
His ravenous mood brings him to an ancient tree trunk, containing a large opening. The tree might as well display a flashing sign: HONEY!
The bear’s sweet tooth needs to be satisfied, but before he can explore further . . . a warning signal vibrates through the inside of the tree.
The colony of honeybees has been notified that an intruder has arrived at their honey factory: HONEY ALERT!
A swarm of bees flies into attack position. The lead striker says, “We have the target in sight.”
GO! GO! GO!
I like this. Try again.:)
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate the encouragement.
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👍👍👍
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Not bad, not bad at all 😊
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Thank you for reading. I am pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Pleasure
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That was cool! Keep’m comin’😊
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Sonrisa, I appreciate your input. I will write another one soon. Best wishes!
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Look forward to it ! Take care.
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Fun! More please. 🙂
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Thanks for the input Julie. I will write another one soon.
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This story made me smile. I sure hope you’ll write more of these!
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Thanks Diana. I appreciate your encouragement, and I will write another soon.
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You’re welcome and I look forward to it.
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Yes, please do!
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Thanks for reading. I appreciate your support, and I will write another story soon.
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I thought it was kind of neat. It made me laugh because I was wondering if you wrote it because you were having a desire for something sweet again!!😃
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Oh Leola, you know a bit of my struggles with sugar. This time no desires for anything sweet as I just wanted to experiment with a very short format for a story.
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I loved the story and look forward to more.
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Thank you for sharing your appreciation. Leola, I am planning more of these micro short stories.
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Awesome 👍🏼👍🏼
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I like
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Thanks for sharing a thought Wally. I tried to write something a bit different, from a grandfather’s perspective.
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