Fresh Day
Shadows’ mysteries
Night’s sobering distortions—
Dawn’s reality

Outlook’s Transitions
False reality
Kaleidoscope’s fading hues—
Returning to gray

Timely Reminder
Steps without traction
Searching for reality—
Perhaps, turn day’s page

Shadows’ mysteries
Night’s sobering distortions—
Dawn’s reality

False reality
Kaleidoscope’s fading hues—
Returning to gray

Steps without traction
Searching for reality—
Perhaps, turn day’s page

Fresh Day is my favorite in this delightful set.
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Diana, thank you for reading and sharing your favorite Haiku. I agree that the first Haiku has a special appeal.
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Such wonderful Haiku! I like the second one best!
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Susan, thank you for reading and sharing. We all experience those gray moments, but may faith continue to trust in the Light.
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Reality is what we make it. If we partner with God, it will be more acceptable to us. Thanks for thought-provoking verses today!
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Amen. When our reality is based upon God’s true light, His wisdom will lead us in a righteous direction. Blessings Vickie.
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Haha! I see we’re voting here, so I vote for “Fresh Day.” 🙂
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Nancy, I appreciate your choice. I enjoy the feel of this Haiku as well.
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