
Tomorrow crashing
Storm coming
Apathy’s reign building
Grave doubts becoming
Challenges brewing
Storm coming
Intensity building
Darkness incoming
Opinions clashing
Storm coming
Confusion keeps building
Future’s shortcomings
All nations trembling
Storm coming
World’s grim outlook building
Frightened and numbing
Trusted light glowing
Peace coming
Storm no longer building
Hope-filled homecoming

Your poem paints a vivid picture of a storm brewing, not just in the weather, but in the hearts and minds of people. The imagery of darkness, apathy, and doubts is contrasted beautifully with the ‘Trusted light glowing’ and ‘Peace coming.’ It’s a powerful reminder that even in turbulent times, hope can guide us through. 🌪️✨
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Sohair, thank you for responding to this poem. There are times when my own journey with words leads me to reflect upon the world’s darkness . . . it seems endless. At the same time, faith invites trust in the light that will bring us to embrace greater hope for tomorrow.
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Amen.. Keep giving dear friend 😊🌷
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I like how you ended this poem! Turns it all around into something good and hopeful.
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Kymber, I appreciate your kind words. In most of my writing, it is better to end a poem filled with darkness with a hope-filled conclusion. Isn’t this what having faith is about?
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You make an excellent point. I agree with you.
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