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A life can sometimes seem deep and dark
Just as the oceans’ waves find their mark
From season to season, a person splashes along
Just as the oceans redeploy, intense and strong
Hardships and misfortunes grudgingly arrive each week
Just as the oceans’ depths mask secrets, waiting to seek
Morning’s sunrise embraces, cheerful and bold
Just as the oceans splash water, much too cold
Today brings a bit of uncertainty and sadness
Just as the oceans bring a light of happiness
One wonders and dreams of a better life
Just as the oceans dispense little strife
A walk along the sandy beach sounds great
Just as the oceans’ tides deliver a final fate
The gentle waves engage loneliness for a swim
Just as the oceans’ surf arrives without a whim
A final desperate, draining breath takes one under
Just as the oceans stand still and start to wonder
deep and indulging.I love the emotions it evokes Ricchard.Halo big brother.How have you been?
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Very deep. I enjoyed the poem🙂
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Thank you for sharing a thought. The poem is a bit different from what I usually write.
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Lovely, reblogging
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Thanks Pat. I have had the poem waiting in the wings, but I needed to tighten up some of the words before it was ready to publish.
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Very good.
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Thank you for reading. The topic is a bit darker from most of my poetry.
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This was such a beautiful read!
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Thank you Diana. I don’t often write poems on the dark side, but I welcomed the challenge.
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You’re welcome!
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Lovely poem. Great words .
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I hope that your injury is healing.
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Slowly getting there . Thank you.
Blessings
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Beautiful 💕
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Ashok, thanks for reading and sharing a thought. This poem captured a darker side of my writing, but I enjoyed the experience of the contrast of the ocean with the human side of life.
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My pleasure Richard. Yes, I could feel it.
I wrote one too a week or so ago and never posted it.
Love and God bless
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Thank you Ashok for your thoughtful reply. May God continue to bless you as well as your writing and photography.
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Thank you so much and it is always a pleasure talking to you
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