This poem is a guest post from my 11-year old granddaughter. She wrote this poem for her Language Arts class, and she has given permission to post her untouched words just as she wrote them. Enjoy the gratitude that she shares!
This warm bed
that is really comfy and soft
that is only payed off
by my parents and their jobs
that is filled with
blankets, pillows, and stuffed animals
that is around me as I
dream off to sleep
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I lay there at night
to recharge my body
I lay there to rest
my body
I lay there if I am sick
to help heal my body
I lay there to wake up
to get ready for the day
As we get ready to
dream off again
I lay there ready to fall
asleep
Soon I am fast asleep ZZZZZZ
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Beautiful ❤
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Thanks for reading and sharing a comment with my granddaughter.
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You’re most welcome and you most be proud of her 🙂
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must be*
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Filled with gratitude and love! God bless you all!
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Ryan, thanks for sharing a thought. My granddaughter will appreciate it.
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This is cute ❤️
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Thanks for reading and sharing a thought. My granddaughter will be thrilled.
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My best wishes & blessings for her 😇
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Nice one
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Thank you for reading and sharing a thought. My granddaughter will be so happy that you read her poem.
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Sir, being even elder to her I can’t tell you how heart comforting words she wrote…Lots of love to her.
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Thanks Perky. Your comments are very special for her.
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How sweet and loving. May she be happy forever.
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Thanks of reading and sharing a beautiful thought. She will feel blessed by your words.
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My pleasure. May your entire family be blessed.
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So beautiful, and I love that she showed appreciation to her parents for providing that warm bed!!
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Thanks for sharing a wonderful thought. She is a special young lady.
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Very nice. She sounds like a sweet young lady!
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Wonderful poem of thanks, I certainly enjoyed that very much! Well done, keep writing!
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. My granddaughter will appreciate the encouragement.
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My pleasure!
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Aw, this is so sweet! Thanks for sharing her beautiful poem. 🙂
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. She will appreciate your kind words.
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Such beautiful poem full of meaning love and gratitude.
Was a pleasure to read.
Blessings to the young lady.💜
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Sonrisa, thanks for sharing your thoughts. She has been very grateful for all of the comments.
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What a sweet poem!! It made me miss my grandparents. She’s a great writer!
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Michelle, thanks for sharing a thought. My granddaughter has appreciated all of the feedback.
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So innocent, simple and gentle 😊
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Thanks for sharing a thought. My granddaughter is truly humbled by your comment.
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Young talent!
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Wally, thanks for sharing a thought. She is an amazing young lady.
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She certainly has talent, great poem! Beautiful gratitude and love for those who care and protect 🙂
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Kate, thank you for sharing a thought. My granddaughter has a great deal of gratitude for all who have read and commented.
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she will go a long way in this world with such a caring attitude ❤
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She took after you. I am sure you are and should be very proud.
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Thank you Pat. My granddaughter is so blessed by the reception that her poem received.
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Awwww that’s a cute poem. She wrote it brilliantly
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yes, she did an amazing job.
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Beautiful poem… Sir
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Tanusri, thanks for sharing a kind thought. My granddaughter appreciates your input.
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Such a beautiful poem!! Thanks for inspiring me through your blog.
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She’s blessed to have you there to support and encourage her writing efforts. This is delightful!
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Thank you Jan. Believe it or not, my granddaughter’s poem is the most viewed item at Big Sky Buckeye.
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